The First Raid
My biggest problem with these LitRPG/GameLit stories is the action scenes. You bring a fresh sensibility and urgency to it.
It's not written like a log of game combat.
It's written like combat, in a game.
Fantastic job!
Thank you for the kind words, exactly what I was going for.
>Shoots the roach six times, still alive.
Just another summer in the South.
My biggest problem with these LitRPG/GameLit stories is the action scenes. You bring a fresh sensibility and urgency to it.
It's not written like a log of game combat.
It's written like combat, in a game.
Fantastic job!
Thank you for the kind words, exactly what I was going for.
>Shoots the roach six times, still alive.
Just another summer in the South.